Day Fifty
Eight: Characterisation
Focusing on
monologues lately I’ve come to terms with the fact that I am a detailed writer,
I love writing in the sounds a character hears or the colour of shoes they are
wearing. I have since I was young, and I
think it might be my downfall. I have recently
read that it doesn’t matter what colour a character’s shoes is unless it
pertains to the story, unless it reveals something integral about that
character. I don’t necessarily agree
with that statement because really, I think any detail is important (as Judith
would always say, it’s the little things about a character that make them
unique) and so I will continue to include the tiny particular details that I
love about my characters.
Take A for
instance. I’ve been working on A since
about October, and A doesn’t have a super cool name or anything yet, but you
wouldn’t be able to tell by looking at her.
She is tall, tall and falls over chairs on buses and the people sitting
in them. She visits her grandfather a
lot, and likes to play chess despite her not really knowing what each piece
does. She carries a calculator in her
back pocket, and instead of drinking milk with her dinner she has a juice box,
it’s just what she does. She would like to
find a way to prove herself, and that’s just about as much as I’d like to give
away.
When there’s
a character forming inside of me many paragraphs like the one above erupt at
any given moment. Today the beginnings
of that paragraph started two minutes after finishing my monologue in class,
sometimes it’s right when I wake up, but usually it’s when I’m around other
people. When the things that the
character does, or their tick’s erupt I have the impulse to stop what I’m doing
and write them down. Same with their
surroundings, which the description changes for for short stories, novels, and
plays. In A’s instance she is in a play,
which means most of her ticks and surroundings can be manipulated and changed
if not written correctly. But
somethinglike her not knowing what each piece on the chess board does is easy
to write in, but something like her need to prove herself is harder. I am hoping that this play turns out, as it
is very slowly being written, and will hopefully be completed by June (remember
my post on goals? I feel like my first
post in March will be about the summer goals I have set).
Looking
forward to Friday, only one post left which will probably be an ending
poem. Can you tell I am starving for a
good insightful post again? I miss my
meaningful (in that way) blog.
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